Anab liked how you described what the character did (ballet dance). Raedence thought more about your character's back story because of your clever writing. She imagined maybe she lived in a cottage in the forest because she had no parents. Maybe next time you could publish this so it is easier to read. You can use Control-C in the google doc and control- in the blog to do this. From Room 10
Hi Erana, we really liked the way you used descriptive words also we thought it was an AWESOME STORY.Next time try cheeking punctuation. by:Casey & Faith
Anab liked how you described what the character did (ballet dance). Raedence thought more about your character's back story because of your clever writing. She imagined maybe she lived in a cottage in the forest because she had no parents. Maybe next time you could publish this so it is easier to read. You can use Control-C in the google doc and control- in the blog to do this.
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Hi Erana, we really liked the way you used descriptive words also we thought it was an AWESOME STORY.Next time try cheeking punctuation.
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